#OctPoWriMo 2018 Day 1–Surrender
Last night I asked for rain, but Rosa shrugged her shoulders and gave me this sunset.
Surrender
You surrendered to solitude
let go of the what ifs
the somedays,
the he will come
Surrendered to silence
just the dog clicking down the hall
the only soft breath
your own
No need to compromise
pleased your own palate
ate when you were damned good and ready
synchronized sleep with your sigh
at the book’s last page
You surrendered to the laugh lines
the frown lines
the sag
the fragility
Surrendered to forgetfulness
the hand that ached
the jar unopened
the cleaning and garden chores undone
But should
a graying knight offer
to warm your winter
share the chores
laugh at the unopened jar
that defeats you both
will you risk the charge up one last hill
and surrender to love?
Barb, this is beautiful! A favorite image:
“synchronized sleep with your sigh
at the book’s last page”
Thank you. xoA
Yes, yes, yes!
touching…
Beautiful, great imagery…the jar unopened…says it all
Thank you