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October 10–Day Ten #OctPoWriMo October 10, 2017

October 10, 2017

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October 10

Why won’t the warm October breeze
release my grief as easily as it
dispelled last night’s chill?

Why can’t I laugh
as the hummingbird rants
to retain its right to three nectar feeders?

Why only a brief smile
as finches jockey for thistle seed
while pairs of Monarchs spiral ?

Alone on the deck I return
to this day
seven years ago
shattered serenity
hope, hospital
eleven days later
his death by nursing home

Yet still I surrender to October’s power
hold sacred time suspended
before the inevitable grief

8 Comments
  1. zenofjenni's avatar

    Beautiful images and profound sadness.

  2. Deepti's avatar

    Seems like some sad haunting song playing … Giving sadness n calmness all at one gi.

  3. heyannis's avatar

    The profound feeling of loss comes through, Barb. This struck me:
    “Yet still I surrender to October’s power
    hold sacred time suspended
    before the inevitable grief…”

    We attempt to go on, don’t we. Thank you. xoA

  4. Carrie Danielson's avatar
    Carrie Danielson permalink

    Another good one! I recognize that sadness we both share.

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